Hey Lillian, I like your pitch regarding the improvement of student lives through financial relief. Your anecdotal example also helped to emphasize the problem and how your solution can better a life on an individual. I would suggest practicing more to make the pitch more fluid, but overall, great job!
Hey Lillian,
ReplyDeleteI like your pitch regarding the improvement of student lives through financial relief. Your anecdotal example also helped to emphasize the problem and how your solution can better a life on an individual. I would suggest practicing more to make the pitch more fluid, but overall, great job!