22A – Elevator Pitch No. 3

https://youtu.be/UsIvUoU1bN8

2) A reflection on the feedback you received from your last pitch. 

What stood out to me was the comment from a fellow classmate that I had to speak more fluidly and he was correct. I did not receive any feedback that I thought was wrong or silly. 

3) What did you change, based on the feedback?

Based on the feedback I tried to speak more fluidly and added pauses in my speech. I also changed the pricing of my product as someone commented that I was offering a lot of work and value for the low price of $100. I decided to take her advice because I remember Dr.Pryor gave a lecture where he spoke about how important it is to charge what your services/products are actually worth.